I don´t own any of the characters.

One of my first writings... English is not my mother language XD Also not my father language, uncle, aunt etc... so please excuse any mistakes I may have made.

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Snow. And Death.

Snow and Death were the thoughts which ruled this moment. Holding his coat I never thought anything else.

I hated him.

Looking in his innocent and fearful eyes I hated him even more.

“You have to die, Wing Master.” I said creepily, my voice was filled with a fake of gentleness. I was watching him furiously. The little boy panicked, he swallowed hard and struggled. Senseless.

Nearly I could hear his conversations with the Black Winged Kaitou, or should I say, his monologues with the Great and Black Winged, surely never defeated, Kaitou Dark Mousy?

He stared at me, tried to bear the look of my icy, golden eyes filled with insanity. I was obsessed by the thought of killing him right now. Breaking his neck and punishing him for being the kind and naive person he was. Being the one Satoshi, my Satoshi, called his “Most Important”. My Satoshi hated me. I was his curse, a cruel creature who didn´t mind to destroy everything he loved, the side every Hikari had worn inside before. Releasing one hand from his coat I laid it on his neck, lightly. The body tensed.

Emptiness. Loneliness. I knew it.

I could read his mind through the big pools of crimson. For once they didn´t smile. It seemed he finally realized that nobody would rescue him. Instead him I smiled.

Giving a soft chuckle I brought his eyes close to mine and our noses nearly touched. The Niwa boy flinched and I enjoyed his fear.

My mouth reached his ear and I whispered: “Loneliness. Cold and Unbearable. Breathless. You have to get to know.” Everything went black.

And Snow became Rain.

FIN?

wow... i think that was really good... although, i didn't really get the last part...can you explain it???

How come nobody does XD Ok, it's a very open ending. Snow is cold and when snow melts it becomes rain. We'll never know if it's a metapher (=picture) for Krad's heart melting because he killed Daisuke or if it's just a normal occasion like a change of weather (at least in my country there often is something called snowrain).

The ? after Fin just makes the feeling stronger: Is Daisuke dead? Did he only black out?

If you want a sure ending, just believe Daisuke is dead and Krad's heart melted for now (we know he'll never be satisfied ;) )

lolz... okay..... thanx!!!!!!!!!!

that was interesting! way better than I could ever do... I have tried writing fanfic's before, but I could never finish them...

and I kinda like the last line in your fic...

WOW its great it sounds like a poem in my ears :D